Boost Response Rates
and Income with Appealing Fundraising Letter
Envelopes.
Written by:
Alan Sharpe
Writing a
terrific fundraising letter is a waste of time if your donor
throws your entire package in the trash unopened. And that
happens more often than any of us dare to think about. That's
why your envelope is so crucial to your success.
Your envelope serves two
functions and two alone. It must:
* deliver your appeal to your
donor
* persuade your donor to open and
read your package
Getting your appeal into the
hands of your donor is not hard if you mail to a good list,
either your own house list or a rented list of quality
prospects. But persuading your donors to actually open your
envelope and read your appeal--and respond to it with a
gift--that's the difficult part.
Your envelope faces a number of
challenges.
Your donors are
busy
Like you, your donors are busy.
They are preoccupied with meeting their sales quotas, finding a
good paediatrician, fixing the leak in the roof, spoiling their
grandkids, finishing college with an A average, buying a more
reliable vehicle, meeting their deadline, meeting their life
partner, and making ends meet. In the middle of their busy
life, your fundraising appeal drops through the mailbox. Should
they open it, lay it aside for later, or chuck it? Your
envelope will likely decide which.
Competition from other
charities
If your donors are typical, they
receive solicitations from other non-profit organizations each
week. Your envelope will likely be one among many. How will you
stand out? How will you persuade your donor or prospective
donor (or former donor) to open your envelope first--if at all?
Your envelope is your first chance, maybe your only
chance.
Competition from other
mail
Your package is also competing
with electricity bills, bank statements, pizza flyers, credit
card statements, personal letters, credit card offers and junk
mail. Your reader will open these pieces of mail in a
particular order, starting with the most pressing. The size,
shape, weight and look of your envelope will determine if it
gets opened or not.
Competition from other
media
You are also competing with
door-to-door fundraisers. And telephone canvassers. And
telethons (television fundraisers). Not to mention the evening
news, sitcoms, today's newspaper, CNN.com and a literal host of
radio shows and satellite TV channels. How can you get your
fundraising appeal letter package to break through this noise
and reach your donor? You need to start with your
envelope.
The benefits of getting your
appeal letters opened and read are tremendous:
* you will likely immediately
boost your response rate, since more donors will read your
appeal and respond with a gift, all other things being
equal
* you will increase your gift
income, since higher response rates mean more gifts
* you will reduce your cost to
raise a gift, because the increase in revenue will offset your
mailing costs
* you will improve your renewal
rates, since more of your first-time donors will open, read and
respond to your subsequent appeals
* you will reduce your attrition
rates, because you will keep more donors engaged and interested
in your cause
None of these benefits will be
yours unless your donors open your envelopes. That's where the
battle for your donor's head and heart begins. Don't lose the
battle there. Create envelopes that are simply irresistible.
Here are some tips.
Oversize Window
If you are mailing a premium,
have it appear through an oversize window.
Unusual or Unexpected
Dimensions
Switch from a #10 window to
something larger or smaller.
Unique
Addressing
Address the letter by
hand.
Use Every Inch
Available
Put a dramatic photo on your
envelope that stretches from one side right across to the
other.
Tease the Donor
Inside
Ask a question or pose a riddle
that is answered inside.
Multiple
Windows
Put another window on the
envelope and have something interesting show through from the
inside.
Don't Use an
Envelope
Mail your letter in a box, a
cylinder or something else that stands out.
Postage
Use a commemorative
stamp.
Lumpy Mail
Put something three-dimensional,
like a wrist band, in the envelope.
Put the Donor on the
Envelope
Put a message to the donor on the
front or back, using their first name.
Add a Personal
Touch
Hand-write a note.
The possibilities for creative
and compelling envelopes are limited only by your imagination
(and your budget, of course!). Strive to create the most
irresistible envelopes you can, with every package you mail,
and you will be rewarded with higher response rates and higher
income.
2006
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author:
Alan Sharpe is a
professional fundraising letter writer, instructor,
coach, author and newsletter publisher who helps
non-profit organizations to raise funds, build
relationships and retain loyal donors using
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